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2019-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having children? -Advantage is i will see me when i was [이름] age from my children and Disadvantage is you can lose your time and your free 2. What kinds of things do people have to give up when they have children? -I think probably you have to give up what you can do at your age. Example traveling and hang out with fiends and so what 3. What’s your opinion of people who choose not to have children? -I can understand because it hard to raise a children. You need to many money and good environment.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

Advantage is i will see me when i was [이름] age from my children and Disadvantage is you can lose your time and your free

>>The advantage is I will see my children and can compare my childhood days with the. The disadvantage is you wasted your time.

I think probably you have to give up what you can do at your age.

>>I think you can probably give up what you can do at your age.

Example traveling and hang out with fiends and so what

>> Example is traveling and hanging out with friends.

I can understand because it hard to raise a children.

>>I can understand because it hard to raise children.

You need to many money and good environment.

>>You need money and good environment.

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