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If you had the chance to choose a superpower, what would it be and why?
If i had the chance, i want to get a teleporting ability. It is to go to everywhere whenever i want. I want to go around many countries. That\'s why i want to be a pilot. I want to experience various cultures and beautiful scenery. This is the biggest reason. and i can live my life very conveniently. For now, I\'m doing military services. it\'s not permitted to go out at dawn. But, If i have this ability, I can hang out with my friends at late nigiht.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay!
What a useful superpower indeed! :D
That would be totally awesome.
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
~t. Ally
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If i had the chance, i want to get a teleporting ability.
>> If I had the chance, I would like to be able to teleport.
It is to go to everywhere whenever i want.
>> So that I can go anywhere, whenever I want.
I want to go around many countries.
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I want to be a pilot.
>> CORRECT!
I want to experience various cultures and beautiful scenery.
>> I want to experience various cultures and a beautiful scenery.
This is the biggest reason. and i can live my life very conveniently.
>> Aside from this very important reason, I can also live my life very conveniently.
For now, I\'m doing military services. it\'s not permitted to go out at dawn.
>> As of now, I;m doing my military service, and I am not permitted to go out at dawn.
But, If i have this ability, I can hang out with my friends at late nigiht.
>> But if I have this ability, I can hang out with my friends late at night.
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