HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
How is beauty defined in your society? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Beauty is defined as good apperence in our society.
People try to do many things to have good apperence.
People go on a diet, get plastic surgery or go to skincare clinic.
But the trend is changing thesedays.
People think that heathy and natural apperences is more important.
강사 첨삭
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Beauty is defined as good apperence in our society.
>>> Beauty is defined as having a good appearance in society.
People try to do many things to have good apperence.
>>> People try to do many things to have a good appearance.
People go on a diet, get plastic surgery or go to skincare clinic.
>>> CORRECT =)
But the trend is changing thesedays.
>>> But the trend is changing these days.
People think that heathy and natural apperences is more important.
>>> People think that being healthy and having a natural appearance is more important.
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