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2019-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Q)What three adjectives best describe December, and why? December can be expressed as joyful, completing and beginning. Many parties are held in December. For example, meetings with school alumni, company colleagues and family members. We talk about the past year’s stories and the new future plans in the parties. Since the world is busy, there is not much time to meet, so the meeting at the end of the year is more joyful. December is the month of completion. I have to check the result of plans that I planned in the beginning of this year. It is need to analyze the cause about the poor outcome and find out the better solutions. December is beginning month to prepare the new year’s plans. It is need to develop a new plan based on analysis of the result of last years. The realistic planning is also important so that it doesn\'t become an anticlimax.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Each person had different experiences this year and it\'s good to hear their stories. I hope that we shall have good memories as we close this year. Have a bountiful holiday!~~T.Dee


December can be expressed as joyful, completing and beginning. 

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: December can be described as joyful, fulfilling and renewing. 
Many parties are held in December.

>>CORRECT!

For example, meetings with school alumni, company colleagues and family members.

>>CORRECT!

We talk about the past year’s stories and the new future plans in the parties.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: We talk about our experiences and our plans for the future.

Since the world is busy, there is not much time to meet, so the meeting at the end of the year is more joyful.

>>CORRECT!

>>Because everyone is busy, there is not much time to meet. This is why meeting at the end of the year is more joyful.

December is the month of completion.

>>CORRECT!

I have to check the result of plans that I planned in the beginning of this year.

>>I have to check the results of the plans that I made at the beginning of this year.

It is need to analyze the cause about the poor outcome and find out the better solutions.

>>I need to analyze the cause of the poor outcome and find out the better solutions.

>>OR: There is a need for me to reflect on the reasons why I didn\'t get the result that I wanted and for me to work on them better.
December is beginning month to prepare the new year’s plans.

>>December is the beginning because it is the month to prepare plans for the next year.
It is need to develop a new plan based on analysis of the result of last years.

>>There is a need to develop new plans on basis of the result of  one\'s analysis about what happened in the previous years.
The realistic planning is also important so that it doesn\'t become an anticlimax.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: The realistic planning is also important so that it doesn\'t become an anticlimactic.

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