Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you think they should extend the retirement age in your country? Why or why not?
- I think they should extend the retirement age, because they have the skills that new people need to learn. It makes good take over
2. Should there be a one-size-fits-all approach to retirement age, or should it be flexible enough?
- I think it is right that it should be fleixble enough. I think they should retirement slowly because they have to responsible for family
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
I think they should extend the retirement age, because they have the skills that new people need to learn.
>>I think they should extend the retirement age, because they have the skills that [이름] people need to learn.
It makes good take over.
>>CORRECT!
I think it is right that it should be fleixble enough.
>> I think it is right that it should be flexible enough.
I think they should retirement slowly because they have to responsible for family
>> I think they should retire late because they have to be responsible for their family.
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