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2019-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Have you ever seen pirated/ copied/ fake goods for sale? What are the easiest things to pirate and sell nowadays? Why do you think people continue to buy these? Yes, I\'ve seen a lot of fake goods selling on the street. But, i don\'t think it\'s that bad. Because it\'s the only way for poor people to get luxurious items. Many people worry that it could have negative impacts on genuine items. But, anyway, rich people are not gonna buy fake items. Because that kinds of things have meanings more than just the price. It\'s kind of pride for them. After all, People who can buy genuine things are supposed to buy real things.

강사 첨삭

I completely agree with you, Jay! 

Great composition.
I am looking forward to the next ones. 



~t. Ally



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Yes, I\'ve seen a lot of fake goods selling on the street. 
>> Yes, I have seem a lot of fake goods being sold on the streets.

But, i don\'t think it\'s that bad. 
>> CORRECT! 

Because it\'s the only way for poor people to get luxurious items. 
>> CORRECT!

Many people worry that it could have negative impacts on genuine items. 
>> CORRECT!

But, anyway, rich people are not gonna buy fake items. 
>> But anyway, rich people will not consider buying fake items.

Because that kinds of things have meanings more than just the price. 
>> Because that kind of thing has more meaning to them.

It\'s kind of pride for them. 
>> It\'s a form of pride for them.

After all, People who can buy genuine things are supposed to buy real things.
>> CORRECT!

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