homework
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Do you think men and women enjoy the same kinds of sports? Explain 4-5 sentences.
Well, It depends on what type of sports and how they stand out the sports.
In korean, many of men are enjoying play soccer and basketball, vice versa for women.
But, there are also enjoyable sports for both women and men, especially in this winter season, we usually ski and get snow boarding. Also, swimming is proper sports.
For these reasons, that is why I said that it is flexible playing sports to women and men.
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Hi there, Dasiy! Thanks for sending in your homework. :) Yeah, you\'re right!
T. James
Well, It depends on what type of sports and how they stand out the sports.
>>> CORRECT
In korean, many of men are enjoying play soccer and basketball, vice versa for women.
>>> In Korean, many men are enjoying play soccer and basketball, vice versa for women.
But, there are also enjoyable sports for both women and men, especially in this winter season, we usually ski and get snow boarding.
>>> But, there are also enjoyable sports for both women and men, especially in this winter season, we usually ski and get snowboarding.
Also, swimming is proper sports.
>>> Also, swimming is a proper sport.
For these reasons, that is why I said that it is flexible playing sports to women and men.
>>> For these reasons, that is why I said that it is flexible playing sports for women and men.
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