homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you of extreme sports?
I do like playing extreme sports. When I\'m doing those things I feel I am alive. I especially like riding a board such as snowboarding, surfing, wakeboarding, and so on. I cannot say that I am extremely good at riding them but I can say that I enjoy them. Lastly, I will go to do sky diving someday because it\'s on my bucket list.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jake!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you of extreme sports?
I do like playing extreme sports.
>> correct
When I\'m doing those things I feel I am alive.
>> or: I feel more alive when I do those things.
I especially like riding a board such as snowboarding, surfing, wakeboarding, and so on.
>> I especially like riding a board, such as snowboarding, surfing, wakeboarding, and so on.
I cannot say that I am extremely good at riding them but I can say that I enjoy them.
>> or: I cannot honestly say that I have mastered the boardsports, but I can say that I enjoy them.
Lastly, I will go to do sky diving someday because it\'s on my bucket list.
>> Lastly, I will try sky diving someday because it\'s on my bucket list.
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