homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Which part of a song do you think is more important: the lyrics or the melody?
I think the melody is more important than the lyrics and there are several reasons. First, there are some songs such as classic that don\'t have lyrics at all. Plus, people even like and listen to songs that are in different languages. They cannot understand what the lyrics mean but they still are able to enjoy listening to it.
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Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Which part of a song do you think is more important: the lyrics or the melody?
I think the melody is more important than the lyrics and there are several reasons.
>> or: If you ask me, I\'d say the melody is more important than the lyrics and there are several reasons for this.
First, there are some songs such as classic that don\'t have lyrics at all.
>> First, there are some music, such as classical that don\'t have lyrics at all.
>> Music is a sound, or the study of such sounds, organized in time while song is a musical composition with lyrics for voice or voices, performed by singing.
>> Classical music is the kind of music composed by Beethoven, Bach, Mozart, etc. while \"classic music\" is anything that stays in the public consciousness and can be of any genre, including rock, country and western, jazz, e.g. Dave Brubeck\'s Take Five.
Plus, people even like and listen to songs that are in different languages.
>> or: Other than that, people even enjoy songs that are in different languages.
They cannot understand what the lyrics mean but they still are able to enjoy listening to it.
>> correct
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