homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Which artists/bands do you want to see at a music festival? Why?
I don\'t like going to a music festival but if I go there then I\'d like to see Charlie Puth. He\'s a wonderful singer because he knows how to sing well and how to use his nice voice. Also, the songs that he sings have also a tasty melody. These are why I want to see him at a festival.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jake!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Which artists/bands do you want to see at a music festival? Why?
I don\'t like going to a music festival but if I go there then I\'d like to see Charlie Puth.
>> I don\'t like going to music festivals but if I go to one, then I\'d like to see Charlie Puth.
He\'s a wonderful singer because he knows how to sing well and how to use his nice voice.
>> He\'s a fantastic singer because he can sing well and knows how to use his wonderful voice.
Also, the songs that he sings have also a tasty melody.
>> Also, the songs that he sings have a catchy melody.
These are why I want to see him at a festival.
>> These are the reasons why I want to see him at a festival.
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