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If you could ask for a Christmas miracle, what would it be and why?
I want to finish my military service. It has been a year since i enlisted in the army. now, i\'m sicking of working here There is nothing hard to live here. But, i just want to get out of here. I have 7 months left till i finish military service. Whenever i see the end, i feel very stuffy.
So, if i have a chance to ask for a Christmas miracle, i will finish it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay. ^^
Awww, don\'t worry, 7 months will fly by! ^^
That\'s a really nice Christmas miracle though.
I wish it could come true for you.
~t. Ally
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I want to finish my military service.
>> CORRECT!
It has been a year since i enlisted in the army.
>> CORRECT!
now, i\'m sicking of working here There is nothing hard to live here.
>> Now, I\'m getting sick of working here, although, living here isn\'t so hard.
But, I just want to get out of here.
>> CORRECT!
I have 7 months left till i finish military service.
>> CORRECT!
Whenever i see the end, i feel very stuffy.
>> Whenever I remember how far the end of my service is from now, I feel very stuffy.
>> Whenever I remember how far the end of my service is from now, I feel very stuffy.
So, if i have a chance to ask for a Christmas miracle, i will finish it.
>> So, if i have a chance to ask for a Christmas miracle, I would want to finish my service.
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