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2019-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. Why do you think wine is becoming as popular as beer and soju? - Maybe i think wine has a rich flavor and a variety flavor better than beer and soju. 2. Is there a typical traditional drink in your city? What is it made from? -The name is makeolli. It makes rice and it has strong lactobacillus, so you will have stomach tomorrow. I would say drink in moderation 3. What\'s your opinion of the modern use of plastic stoppers instead of corks for wine bottles? -I don\'t know about wine. But i think plastic stoppers is easy to drink wine

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

Maybe I think wine has a rich flavor and a variety flavor better than beer and soju.

>>I think wine has a rich flavor and a variety flavor better than beer and soju.

The name is makeolli.

>>CORRECT!

>>Makeolli is the name.

It makes rice and it has strong lactobacillus, so you will have stomach tomorrow.

>>It\'s made out of rice and it has strong lactobacillus, so you will have a comfortable stomach.

I would say drink in moderation.

>>CORRECT!

I don\'t know about wine.

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t know anything about wine.

But I think plastic stoppers is easy to drink wine

>> But I think plastic stoppers is easy to drink with wine.

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