Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you had the chance to leave Korea and work, study or retire in another country, would you take that chance? Which country would you choose and why?
I want to work in the Japan. Because i think Japan is the most same country with Korea. So, it would not be inconvenient. and i liked the Japanese structures\' mood. It\'s very old and beautiful. My goal is to work in Japanese airline. I will study Japanese after i finish English.
I really want to work in Japan. But, these days, the relationship between Korea and Japan is not good because of the history and trade regulations. I\'m so sad that some people in both of countries really hate each other. I hope the relationship would be better.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay!
Have a wonderful New Year! ^^
I hear that Japan is actually really beautiful.
Unfortunately, the issue between your country and theirs hasn\'t died down yet.
But I support your wish.
I think it\'s a great idea! ^^
~t. Ally
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I want to work in the Japan. Because i think Japan is the most same country with Korea.
>> I want to work in Japan because I think it is the most similar country with Korea.
So, it would not be inconvenient. and i liked the Japanese structures\' mood.
>> So, it wouldn\'t be inconvenient, and I liked the mood of the Japanese structures.
It\'s very old and beautiful.
>> CORRECT!
My goal is to work in Japanese airline.
>> My goal is to work in a Japanese airline.
I will study Japanese after I finish English.
>> I will study Japanese after I finish studying English.
I really want to work in Japan.
>> CORRECT!
But, these days, the relationship between Korea and Japan is not good because of the history and trade regulations.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m so sad that some people in both of countries really hate each other.
>> CORRECT!
I hope the relationship would be better.
>> CORRECT!
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