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2020-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What do you think are the reasons why people who eat alone do not eat enough? -I didn\'t think so but when i was eating alone do not eat enough. I think when i eat meal with someone we talk a lot. So i think when we talk a lot i burn calories 2. Do you eat a lot of small portions or a few large portions of food each day? Do you think that a person’s eating habits affect how long they will live? -I eat every day small or middle portions meal three in one day, because i have to keep my healthy I think it affects. Usually, people who eat slowly are healthy. I think it\'s good habit but it\'s hard and i\'m trying

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

I didn\'t think so but when i was eating alone do not eat enough.

>>I didn\'t think so but when I was eating alone I do not eat enough.

I think when i eat meal with someone we talk a lot.

>>I think when I eat meal with someone I talk a lot.

>>I talk a lot when I eat with someone.

So i think when we talk a lot i burn calories.

>>CORRECT!

>>I burn calories when I eat with someone.

I eat every day small or middle portions meal three in one day, because i have to keep my healthy

>>I eat meals every day, small or middle portions three times a day, because I have to keep healthy.

I think it affects.

>>CORRECT!

Usually, people who eat slowly are healthy.

>>CORRECT!

>>People who usually eat slowly are healthy.

I think it\'s good habit but it\'s hard and i\'m trying.

>>CORRECT!

>> I think it\'s a good habit but it\'s hard and I\'m trying.

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