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2020-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What would you like to achieve in the year 2020? I want to master English for 2020. and i want to go forward to Japanese. But, Sadly, To learn a language isn\'t achieved for a short time although i study very hard. It looks like there needs some time to apply for the language. So, I set a year for mastering English. and i\'m gonna make my own online store. and i hope achievements through it in certain point.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jay!

I like how motivated you are about setting a good future for yourself. ^^

Keep it up!

~t. Ally

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I want to master English for 2020. and i want to go forward to Japanese.

>> I want to master the English language in the year 2020, and I want to move forward into learning Japanese.

But, Sadly, To learn a language isn\'t achieved for a short time although i study very hard.

>> But sadly, learning a language cannot be achieved in a short time, despite studying very hard.

It looks like there needs some time to apply for the language.

>> It looks like there needs to be some time for me to apply for the languages I want to learn.

So, I set a year for mastering English.

>> So, I set a year to master the English language.

and i\'m gonna make my own online store. and i hope achievements through it in certain point.

>> I\'m also going to make my own online store and achieve more through it at a certain point.

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