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2020-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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i would like to improve english skill. i am interested in studying english. I will visit america sometime taking lectures about my major. i visited seattle on july because of that reason. sometimes, i take lesson through online study website in english. i cannot understand those whole lessons not yet. please help improving listening and speaking skills.

강사 첨삭

HAPPY MONDAY! Thank you so much for answering your essay today.

I will do my best to help improve your listening and speaking skills.

Aja aja!

~Teacher Eve.

i would like to improve english skill. i am interested in studying english.

>> I would like to improve my English skills. I am interested in studying English.
 I will visit america sometime taking lectures about my major. i visited seattle on july because of that reason.

>> I will be visiting America sometime and will be taking lectures about my major. I visited Seattle last July, because of that reason.
 sometimes, i take lesson through online study website in english.

>> Sometimes, I take my lessons through online in English.
 i cannot understand those whole lessons not yet.

>> I cannot understand the whole lesson yet.
 please help improving listening and speaking skills.

>> Please help me improve my listening and speaking skills.

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