Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think is the biggest issue between China and Korea? How is it affecting you as citizens?
I think it\'s related to the trade. China applies lots of regulation to Korean products. Maybe, Although it would be to protect their industry, It\'s too much. They try to regulate all things including their people because they are based on socialism. So, There are many Chineses investing in Korea. The number is increasing significantly. The thing is that by doing that, they interrupt Korean real estate system. and there are many Koreans who have negative perspectives on Chinsese. So, I think China government regulation causes the conflicts between both countries\' people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay. ^^
Thank you for sharing your honest opinion.
I agree with your composition.
I think this is a problem that has lasted way too long.
But I am hopeful that Korea will be able to find a good compromise in the near future.
~t. Ally
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I think it\'s related to the trade.
>> CORRECT!
China applies lots of regulation to Korean products.
>> China applies lots of regulations to Korean products.
Maybe, Although it would be to protect their industry, It\'s too much.
>> Maybe, although it\'s supposed to protect their industry, it\'s too much.
They try to regulate all things including their people because they are based on socialism.
>> CORRECT!
So, There are many Chineses investing in Korea.
>> So, There are many Chinese investing in Korea.
The number is increasing significantly.
>> CORRECT!
The thing is that by doing that, they interrupt Korean real estate system. and there are many Koreans who have negative perspectives on Chinsese.
>> The thing is that by doing that, they interrupt the Korean real estate system, and there are many Koreans who have negative perspectives toward Chinese people.
So, I think China government regulation causes the conflicts between both countries\' people.
>> So, I think the Chinese government regulations cause the conflicts between both countries\' people.
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