Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your New Year\'s Resolution? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
There are My new year\'s resolutions as below.
First, I will increase my English skill continuethly.
Second, I will try to learn how to be a translater.
Third, I will work as a part timer agian.
Fourth, I will take excercise like hot yoga, swimming.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Serena. I am glad to know your New Year\'s resolution for this year. Thank you for sharing those. I hope you fulfill all these things. I wish you all the best. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
There are My new year\'s resolutions as below.
>>> My New Year\'s resolutions are listed below.
First, I will increase my English skill continuethly.
>>> First, I will develop my English skills continuously.
Second, I will try to learn how to be a translater.
>>> Second, I will try to learn how to be a translator.
Third, I will work as a part timer agian.
>>> Third, I will work as a part-time employee again.
Fourth, I will take excercise like hot yoga, swimming.
>>> Fourth, I will do exercises like hot yoga and swimming.
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