HOMEWORK~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
As a Korean, I respect their choose.
>>As a Korean, I respect their choice.
To live with someone is very tough.
>>CORRECT!
>>Living with someone is tough.
Because they will need many conditions.
>>Because they need lots of conditions.
I think the advantages are that you don\'t offend feel with someone and you will have a lot of spare time.
>>I think the advantages are you don\'t feel offended with someone and you will have a lot of spare time.
The disadvantages are that you will feel lonely and if when do you something with someone that you will be more fun.
>>The disadvantages are you will feel lonely and if when do you something with someone you will feel it\'ll be more fun.
If I retire I feel like look forward to it.
>>I look forward to it.
Because I think The end is another beginning.
>>CORRECT!
I will think bright side
>>I will think on the bright side.
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