Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about a culture in Korea that is still strongly followed by the people. Do you think it needs to be changed or not? Why?
We have a culture giving a big flower to someone who has been promoted. But, Most of them who are given the flower don\'t manage their flowers well. So, it\'s almost useless to give a flower. But , everyone followed the rule because that\'s just the way it is. I want this would be changed to be more useful. For example, to treat him a meal to congratulate his promotion. I think it would be more suitable for modern people.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jay. ^^
This is a good example!
Thank you for always being consistent in doing your homework.
~t. Ally
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We have a culture giving a big flower to someone who has been promoted.
>> We have a culture of giving a big flower to someone who has been promoted.
But, Most of them who are given the flower don\'t manage their flowers well.
>> But most of the people who are given a flower don\'t really know how to take care of them.
So, it\'s almost useless to give a flower.
>> CORRECT!
But , everyone followed the rule because that\'s just the way it is.
>> But everyone follows the rule because that\'s just the way it is.
I want this would be changed to be more useful.
>> I want this to be changed into something more useful.
For example, to treat him a meal to congratulate his promotion.
>> For example, instead of a flower, they should just treat the person to a meal, or congratulation him or her.
I think it would be more suitable for modern people.
>> CORRECT!
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