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I look forward to retiring.
>>CORRECT!
One of the reasons is because traveling around the world has been a dream fir a long time.
>> One of the reasons is because traveling around the world has been my dream for a long time.
When I am retired, and if I have enough money, I would like to spend the rest of my life with doing whatever I want to do.
>>CORRECT!
Before I get retired, I am positive that there will not be much free time to spend for me.
>>Before I get retired, I am positive that there will not be much free time for me to spend .
Another reason is because I want to be free of the business-related people I am not very fond of.
>>CORRECT!
As we are part of the society here are times when we have to encounter people againsy our wishes.
>>As we are part of the society there are times when we have to encounter people against our wishes.
However, when i get retured, I can only make relationships with people I want to spend time with.
>>However, when I get retired, I can only make relationships with people I want to spend time with.
Therefore I cannot wait for the day I get retired.
>> Therefore, I cannot wait for the day I get retired.
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