homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you think is the most interesting job in the world? Why?
I think the most interesting job in the world is a travel guide. Travel guides can go to interesting places and even they can look around and take some photos in their working time. Also, they can meet lots of new people so they can make different kinds of friends from all over the world.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jake!^^
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Cheers!
Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What do you think is the most interesting job in the world? Why?
I think the most interesting job in the world is a travel guide.
>> I think the most interesting job in the world is being a travel guide.
Travel guides can go to interesting places and even they can look around and take some photos in their working time.
>> Travel guides can go to interesting places and they can even look around and take some photos in their working time.
Also, they can meet lots of new people so they can make different kinds of friends from all over the world.
>> correct
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