homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with
a person who is very different from you?
Most people think the same way so we generally don\'t have a chance to work with someone very different from me. But if I can have the chance then I think I can learn different ideas and expressions from the person even if It wouldn\'t be easy to understand those things. Plus, if I can understand them it would be motivated to upgrade the inside of myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jake!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with
a person who is very different from you?
Most people think the same way so we generally don\'t have a chance to work with someone very different from me.
>> Most people think the same way so we generally don\'t have a chance to work with someone very different from us.
But if I can have the chance then I think I can learn different ideas and expressions from the person even if It wouldn\'t be easy to understand those things.
>> correct
Plus, if I can understand them it would be motivated to upgrade the inside of myself.
>> Plus, if I can understand them, it would motivate me to improve my inner self.
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