HOMEWORK~!!

2020-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Why do you think people from the [이름]er generation prefer to spend their free time alone? - As a [이름]er generation, I understand them. I think the reason they spend their free time alone is because they feel comfortable and It\'s challenging. Honestly, when I did something alone it was first hard but I got used to it now. So it\'s attractive. 2. Do you like spending time with other people or do you prefer to spend your personal time on your own? Why? - It depends on the situation. I prefer a little more spend time with my best friends. Because it is more fun and I can keep smiling. But there is no time to meet them. So I try to get used to do something alone. I can do it. ~!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you An !

Sometimes, it\'s good to be alone as long as you don\'t feel lonely. :_)

~Teacher Lucy

As a [이름]er generation, I understand them.

>>CORRECT!

I think the reason they spend their free time alone is because they feel comfortable and It\'s challenging.

>>I think the reason they spend their free time alone is because they feel comfortable and it\'s challenging.

Honestly, when I did something alone it was first hard but I got used to it now.

>>Honestly, when I did something alone it was hard at first but I got used to it now.

So it\'s attractive.

>>So it\'s attracting.

It depends on the situation.

>>CORRECT!

I prefer a little more spend time with my best friends.

>> I prefer a little more time spending with my best friends.

Because it is more fun and I can keep smiling.

>>CORRECT!

But there is no time to meet them.

>>CORRECT!

So I try to get used to do something alone.

>>CORRECT!

I can do it. ~!!

>>CORRECT!

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