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2020-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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What keeps you awake at night? I had sleep deprivation for a long time. Because my son is still baby so he ask me \'what is this\' ,all day long and he do not sleep at until the midnight.Besides he often wake up and cryingㅜㅜ. If he growing up more, will he not crying anymore at night?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

What keeps you awake at night?

>> CORRECT!
I had sleep deprivation for a long time. 

>> I experienced sleep deprivation for a long time.

Because my son is still baby so he ask me \'what is this\' ,all day long 

>> This is because my son is still a baby and he asks me, \"What is this?\", all day long.

and he do not sleep at until the midnight.

>> He also doesn\'t sleep up until midnight.

Besides he often wake up and cryingㅜㅜ. 

>> Besides that, he also often wakes up and cries at night.

If he growing up more, will he not crying anymore at night?

>> If he grows older, will he stop crying at night?

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