homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
What keeps you awake at night?
>> CORRECT!
I had sleep deprivation for a long time.
>> I experienced sleep deprivation for a long time.
Because my son is still baby so he ask me \'what is this\' ,all day long
>> This is because my son is still a baby and he asks me, \"What is this?\", all day long.
and he do not sleep at until the midnight.
>> He also doesn\'t sleep up until midnight.
Besides he often wake up and cryingㅜㅜ.
>> Besides that, he also often wakes up and cries at night.
If he growing up more, will he not crying anymore at night?
>> If he grows older, will he stop crying at night?
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