Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you heard the news about Australia? What solution would you like to suggest to end the devastation happening there?
Yes, I\'ve heard of it. I watched a map about how many places have been burning on the internet. But, it was beyond how i pictured it.
I was very shocked. Almost everywhere was burning. I think Australia needs other countries\' help. It causes a lot of air pollution. So, Finishing it as soon as possible is essential. To do so, The countries near the Australia have to help them put out the fire.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jay. ^^
I was very shocked. Almost everywhere was burning.
Fortunately, your suggestion has already started happening.
I hope Australia recovers from this devastating problem.
Thank you for taking classes with me!
See you next time.
~t. Ally
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Yes, I\'ve heard of it. I watched a map about how many places have been burning on the internet.
>> Yes, I\'ve heard about it. I saw a map on the internet about how many places have been burned.
But, it was beyond how i pictured it.
>> CORRECT!
I was very shocked. Almost everywhere was burning.
>> CORRECT!
I think Australia needs other countries\' help.
>> CORRECT!
It causes a lot of air pollution.
>> It\'s starting to cause a lot of air pollution.
So, finishing it as soon as possible is essential.
>> CORRECT!
To do so, The countries near the Australia have to help them put out the fire.
>> To do so, the countries near Australia have to help them put out the fire.
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