Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What was the most challenging competition/ contest you have participated in? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
In fact, after I become an adult, I have not been participated in contest.
When I am university student, I have participated in competition for global seller.
My item is Korean jewerly. I submmited the daft that I sell Korean jewerly to Europe.
I passed the first step, but I didn\'t pass in second interview.
It\'s good experience to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. Happy Friday! Thank you for diligently completing all your homework this week. I am grateful for that. You did a great job and I look forward to more next week. See you then. Have an amazing weekend! ~ teacher Jane ^o^
In fact, after I become an adult, I have not been participated in contest.
>>> In fact, after I became an adult, I have not participated in contests.
When I am university student, I have participated in competition for global seller.
>>> When I was a university student, I had participated in a competition for a global seller.
My item is Korean jewerly.
>>> My item is a piece of Korean jewelry.
I submmited the daft that I sell Korean jewerly to Europe.
>>> I submitted the draft of the piece of Korean jewelry to Europe.
I passed the first step but I didn\'t pass in second interview.
>>> I passed the first step but I didn\'t pass the second interview.
It\'s good experience to me.
>>> It is a good experience for me.
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