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2020-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. Why do you think Australia is currently experiencing a crisis on bushfires? - People said \"The cause is weather phenomena\". But I think it\'s different. I think the cause is people\'s apathy. Because it is we who created the cause and we were negligent in the global environment. So the environment pollution we made caused a bushfire crisis. 2. In your own way, how do you think can you help Australia right now? - I\'m an ordinary person. So I was finding a way to help in my own way. So I made a small donation through Facebook. And I shared the posts. Ultimately I hope it helps a little.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

People said \"The cause is weather phenomena\".

>>CORRECT!

>>\"The cause is weather phenomena\", people said.

But I think it\'s different.

>>CORRECT!

I think the cause is people\'s apathy.

>>CORRECT!

Because it is we who created the cause and we were negligent in the global environment.

>>Because it is we who created the causes and we were negligent in the global environment.

So the environment pollution we made caused a bushfire crisis.

>>CORRECT!

I\'m an ordinary person.

>>CORRECT!

I was finding a way to help in my own way.

>>CORRECT!

I made a small donation through Facebook.

>>CORRECT!

And I shared the posts.

>>CORRECT!

Ultimately I hope it helps a little.

>>Ultimately,I hope it helps a little.

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