Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
OMEWORK: The dictionary defines \"leisure\" as the absence of duties or work activities. Do you spend your free time actively or \"just\" resting? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Both. I spend my free time actively and just take a rest.
Normally, I spend my free time actively, when I have a schedule of Yoga and piano class,
, play with my daughter or meet with my friends and take a walk.
Besides, I take a rest with reading a book and listing to music.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Serena. Thank you for sharing the activities you do. I am glad you keep yourself busy especially when you have free time. Have a good one today. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
Both. I spend my free time actively and just take a rest.
>>> Both. I spend my free time actively and just taking a rest.
Normally, I spend my free time actively, when I have a schedule of Yoga and piano class,
, play with my daughter or meet with my friends and take a walk.
>>> Usually, I spend my free time actively when I have a schedule for yoga and piano classes, play with my daughter, meet with my friends, or take a walk.
Besides, I take a rest with reading a book and listing to music.
>>> Besides that, I take a rest by reading a book and listening to music.
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