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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are health problems can some gadgets cause?
Recently, smartphones have become the most useful and widely used gadgets whole over the world. This wonderful gadget gives us a lot of convenience for every aspect of our life. However, it also gives us negative effects. It\'s been causing several problems. First, many people are suffered from a slipped disk on their necks. Next, lots of families stopped making a conversation on their kitchen table. They only focus on their own smartphones.
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[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are health problems can some gadgets cause?
Recently, smartphones have become the most useful and widely used gadgets whole over the world.
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This wonderful gadget gives us a lot of convenience for every aspect of our life.
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However, it also gives us negative effects.
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It\'s been causing several problems.
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First, many people are suffered from a slipped disk on their necks.
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Next, lots of families stopped making a conversation on their kitchen table.
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They only focus on their own smartphones.
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