HOMEWORK~!!

2020-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What do you prefer, a tea, coffee, juice or cola and why? - I think it depends on the mood and food what I eat. If I had greasy food, I prefer a tea or cola. Because it seems to digest well. And if I was outside place and inside cafe, I prefer coffee or juice. Because It seems to drink easily and simply. 2. What do you think are the benefits of drinking tea? - There are many kinds of teas. Each tea has a different taste and effect. So many people like tea. Sometime I drink tea with my mother. Drinking tea makes me feel better and relaxed and I sweat out my stress. I would say it is benefits

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy


I think it depends on the mood and food what I eat.

>>CORRECT!

 If I had greasy food, I prefer a tea or cola.

>>CORRECT!

Because it seems to digest well.

>>CORRECT!
 And if I was outside place and inside cafe, I prefer coffee or juice.

>>And if I was outside and inside the cafe, I prefer coffee or juice.

 Because It seems to drink easily and simply.

>> Because it\'s easy and simple to drink.

There are many kinds of teas.

>>CORRECT!

 Each tea has a different taste and effect.

>>CORRECT!

So many people like tea.

>>CORRECT!

Sometime I drink tea with my mother.

>>Sometimes, I drink tea with my mother.
 Drinking tea makes me feel better and relaxed and I sweat out my stress.

>>CORRECT!

I would say it is benefits

>>I would say it is the benefits.

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