HOMEWORK

2020-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK Are you a task-oriented person or a person-oriented person? I am a person-oriented person. I like someone who cares about his colleagues and who can share work together and grow up together, not alone. So, everyone in the workplace will be able to work together happily. -------------------------- His mother will not clean the house tomorrow. The supervisor will not believe a lame excuse. I prepared Unit 9: make. Our business makes a profit of 2M dollars a year. He makes a mistake when he becomes nervous. Did she make a wish on her birthday? Did you make a bet with him the other day? He had made a fool out of himself when he didn\'t rehearse for the play. They have to make the arrangements for the wedding right now. It will make him angry if we arrive late. You just made my day by showing up. He has made some progress with the article. Thank you. ^_^

강사 첨삭

Thank you again In Ae. Talk to you in class. ^_^

HOMEWORK

Are you a task-oriented person or a person-oriented person?
>> Correct. 

I am a person-oriented person.
>> Correct. 

I like someone who cares about his colleagues and who can share work together and grow up together, not alone.
>> I like someone who cares about his colleagues, who can share work together, and to be able to grow up together.

So, everyone in the workplace will be able to work together happily.
>>If that is the case, everyone in the workplace will be able to work together happily.

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His mother will not clean the house tomorrow.
>> Correct. 

The supervisor will not believe a lame excuse.
>> Correct. 

I prepared Unit 9: make.
>> Correct. 

Our business makes a profit of 2M dollars a year.
>> Correct. 

He makes a mistake when he becomes nervous.
>> He makes mistakes when he becomes nervous.

Did she make a wish on her birthday?
>> Correct. 

Did you make a bet with him the other day?
>> Correct. 

He had made a fool out of himself when he didn\'t rehearse for the play.
>> Correct. 

They have to make the arrangements for the wedding right now.
>> Correct.  

It will make him angry if we arrive late.
>> Correct. 

You just made my day by showing up.
>> Correct. 

He has made some progress with the article.
>> Correct. 

Thank you. ^_^
>> Correct. 

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