Homework
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HOMEWORK: Who is mainly responsible for a child’s academic success - the parents or the teachers? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I think the parents are more responsible for a child\'s academic success than the teachers.
Korean parents believe that a child\'s academic success is very imortant for their life.
They take their children to many academy after shool and they move to other town which have famouse academy and school.
But parents don\'t have much time with their child, because they have to earn much money to pay education fee.
But I think that parent\'s emotional support and belief of their children is more important for a child\'s academic success than teacher in school or academy.
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I think the parents are more responsible for a child\'s academic success than the teachers.
>>> CORRECT =)
Korean parents believe that a child\'s academic success is very imortant for their life.
>>> Korean parents believe that a child\'s academic success is very important for their life.
They take their children to many academy after shool and they move to other town which have famouse academy and school.
>>> They take their children to many academies/ private institutes after school and they move to another town which has a famous academy and school.
But parents don\'t have much time with their child, because they have to earn much money to pay education fee.
>>> But parents do not have much time for their child because they have to earn much money to pay for tuition.
But I think that parent\'s emotional support and belief of their children is more important for a child\'s academic success than teacher in school or academy.
>>> But I think that parents\' emotional support and belief of their children is more important for a child\'s academic success than teachers in school or academy/ private institutes.
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