HOMEWORK~!!

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

I think every people want to balanced.

>>I think every people want to be balanced.

 I also want it.

>>CORRECT!

People with mental imbalance lack Confidence and courage.

>>People with mental imbalance are lacking of confidence and courage.

 They don\'t know themselves.

>>CORRECT!

So they don\'t get along because it\'s lacking.

>>So they don\'t get along well because they\'re lacking.

 First, they have to accept themselves and they shouldn\'t struggle.

>>CORRECT!

Than every people will understand them.

>>Then, every people will understand them.

I think I\'m them.

>>I think I\'m similar with them.

So I will try.

>>CORRECT!

Yes I have felt.

>>Yes, I have felt.

When I was [이름], I changed school and I had a shy personality.

>>CORRECT!

Other students didn\'t accept me easily.

>>CORRECT!

 So So I thought a lot to my self.

>> So, I thought a lot to about myself.

I knew I had to talk to them first and approach them.

>>CORRECT!

 I think who outcast are also at fault.

>>I think people who outcast someone are also at fault.

 They must approach others firest and take action.

>>They must approach others first and take action.

However, severe bullying is very wrong.

>> CORRECT!