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2020-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I have not ever suffered a panic attack. But, some people panic in a situation when other people remain calm. Because I think some situations cause trauma for them. For this reason, they may react more than other people.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday! ^-^

Thank you for this composition, [이름].

You are right. Some people may overreact due to trauma.

That\'s why we can\'t really judge people by their reactions only.


Have a good night!


_T. Mayleen :)



I have not ever suffered a panic attack.

>>> I have never suffered a panic attack.

But, some people panic in a situation when other people remain calm.

>>> When some people panic in a situation, other people remain calm.

Because I think some situations cause trauma for them.

>>> I think it\'s because a similar situation gave them a trauma.

For this reason, they may react more than other people.

>>> For this reason, they may react more compared to others.

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