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Happy Thursday! ^-^
Thank you for this composition, [이름].
You are right. Some people may overreact due to trauma.
That\'s why we can\'t really judge people by their reactions only.
Have a good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
I have not ever suffered a panic attack.
>>> I have never suffered a panic attack.
But, some people panic in a situation when other people remain calm.
>>> When some people panic in a situation, other people remain calm.
Because I think some situations cause trauma for them.
>>> I think it\'s because a similar situation gave them a trauma.
For this reason, they may react more than other people.
>>> For this reason, they may react more compared to others.
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