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The human laughing is make happy other people. The same bad feelings are passed on to others. like sad, depression things to do. and the people like the atmosphere of laugthing and enjoying air.
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Hi Dasha!
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Practice always and you will definitely develop.
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Learn from them and use them in your daily conversations.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
The human laughing is make happy other people.
>> A laughing person can make other people happy.
The same bad feelings are passed on to others.
>> It\'s the same when bad feelings also spread to others.
like sad, depression things to do.
>> This includes sadness and depression.
and the people like the atmosphere of laugthing and enjoying air
>> People like a light and happy atmosphere.
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