HOMEWORK~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
I think it will take a long time or it\'s difficult.
>> I think it will take a long time and it\'s difficult.
Because the normally rich are only trying to protect or increase their money.
>>Because normally the rich are only trying to protect or increase their money.
And, the normally poor are not only trying to do much to change society.
>>And, normally the poor are not only trying to do much to change the society.
The rich people should be considerate of money for the poor people.
>>The rich people should be considerate of money to the poor people.
While, the poor people should be humble accept themselves and work harder.
>> While, the poor people should humble themselves and work harder.
Ultimately, the government needs help the most.
>>CORRECT!
There is the gap between rich and poor in my country.
>>CORRECT!
But, it\'s not serious like a north Korea.
>>But, it\'s not serious like North Korea.
The government is helping the poor and the government is making disperse a lot of money from the rich.
>>CORRECT!
But, the government must work harder.
>>CORRECT!
Because, the gap between the rich and poor is getting worse.
>>CORRECT!
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