Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: What do you think is the most serious problem in the world? What can we do as individuals to solve this problem? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I think that it is the problem of environment.
14 aged girl in Sweden commented that the problem of environment is serous and urgent.
I agreed with her. Theseday, thchnology is very developed.
I think that goverment should support thechnology for protecting environment with ohter countries.
But now I am sad that each countries are busy to protect thier industry for their profit.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. I agree this issue should be addressed immediately. I am glad that you keep yourself updated with international news and that you are aware of what is going on in other parts of the world. Good job with another homework well done. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
I think that it is the problem of environment.
>>> I think that the most serious problem in the world is the environment.
14 aged girl in Sweden commented that the problem of environment is serous and urgent.
>>> A 14-year-old girl in Sweden commented that the problem in the environment is serious and urgent.
I agreed with her.
>>> I agree with her.
Theseday, thchnology is very developed.
>>> These days, technology is very developed/ advanced.
I think that goverment should support thechnology for protecting environment with ohter countries.
>>> I think that the government should work with other countries to support technology in protecting the environment.
But now I am sad that each countries are busy to protect thier industry for their profit.
>>> But I am sad that each country is busy protecting their industries for their own profit.
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