Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite winter activity? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
My favority winter activity is sleding with my daughter.
Yesterday, I went to slead with her.
She ride a slead and I pulled the sled.
she pulled the sled in turn.
I hope she has a good memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. I am glad you mentioned this in your homework. I think I was not able to ask about your weekend earlier. ^^ Do not worry, I am sure she will remember this growing up. Thank you once again for sharing. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful and happy Lunar New Year\'s Day! ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
My favority winter activity is sleding with my daughter.
>>> My favorite winter activity is sledding with my daughter.
Yesterday, I went to slead with her.
>>> Yesterday, I went sledding with her.
She ride a slead and I pulled the sled.
>>> She rode the sled and I pulled the sled.
she pulled the sled in turn.
>>> Then she pulled the sled in turn.
I hope she has a good memory.
>>> I hope this is a good memory for her.
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