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2020-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I made up that story. 2. I drove up to his house 3. The police blew up the car. 4. The thieves broke in at around midnight. 5. Are you going to come back later? 6. I was trying to speak, but he cut me off. 7. BOTH ARE CORRECT 8. Thomas\' grandfather passed away last month. 9. Pass out ( = distribute) these forms! 10. We took off (=left) after breakfast. I have been feeling that people who live in city are more sensitive and offensive than the people who live in rural area since I started my job. That\'s why I prefer working in rural area to in city. This tendency also affects my job, because I need to meet tons of people and we usually talk on the phone. When I worked in my hometown, there wasn\'t many calls from people who related to cases. Even they ignored our document which we sent.. But the situation here is different. there are so many calls.. So I can\'t focus on my task during the daytime. I hope that time will be pass quickly.

강사 첨삭

Hello KC,


Thank you for you homework, I hope this could really help you increase your skills in English.

You need to remember to do more things that you are good and do less with the things you aren\'t good at.

Have a wonderful day!!!!

T. Jeny


   

1. I made up that story.

>>BOTH ARE CORRECT
 2. I drove up to his house

>>correct
 3. The police blew up the car.

>>BOTH ARE CORRECT
 4. The thieves broke in at around midnight.

>>correct
 5. Are you going to come back later?

>>correct
 6. I was trying to speak, but he cut me off.

>>correct
 7. BOTH ARE CORRECT

>>correct
 8. Thomas\' grandfather passed away last month.

>>correct
 9. Pass out ( = distribute) these forms!

>>BOTH ARE CORRECT
 10. We took off (=left) after breakfast.
>>correct
I have been feeling that people who live in city are more sensitive and offensive than the people who live in rural area since I started my job. 

>>I have been feeling that people who live in the city are more sensitive and offensive than the people who live in a rural area since I started my job. 

 That\'s why I prefer working in rural area to in city.

>>That\'s why I prefer working in the rural area than in the city.

This tendency also affects my job, because I need to meet tons of people and we usually talk on the phone.

>>correct

When I worked in my hometown, there wasn\'t many calls from people who related to cases.

>>When I worked in my hometown, there weren\'t many calls from people related to the cases.

Even they ignored our document which we sent..

>>They even ignore the documents we give.

But the situation here is different. there are so many calls.

>>correct

So I can\'t focus on my task during the daytime. 

>>correct

 I hope that time will be pass quickly.

>>I hope that time would pass quickly.

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