HOMEWORK~!!

2020-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

Have a nice holiday on Friday~!! 1. Why do you think China and all other third-world countries are banning the use of single-use plastic? - Single-use plastic is the best invention. Single-use plastic is very useful and convenient. But, people were arrogant and people were insensitive to the environment. Sing-use plastic caused environmental pollution and threatened sea animals life. I think we are also nt late. Ultimately, we have to make an invention to replace single-use plastic 2. Do you think all countries or nations should do it? Why? Definitely, yse. I think we must think sea animals. Because, the vinyl and a variety of plastics we use cause environmental pollution. Recently, we are also reducing our use of vinyl and a variety of plastics. Lastly, we must use the earth cleanly for the future.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

Bravo! Your composition is amazing. It\'s well written. Please keep it up, An! :)

~Teacher Lucy


Single-use plastic is the best invention.

>>CORRECT!

Single-use plastic is very useful and convenient.

>>CORRECT!

But, people were arrogant and people were insensitive to the environment.

>>CORRECT!

 Sing-use plastic caused environmental pollution and threatened sea animals life.

>>CORRECT!

I think we are also nt late.

>>I think we are not late.

 Ultimately, we have to make an invention to replace single-use plastic

>>CORRECT!

Definitely, yse.

>>Definitely, yes.

I think we must think sea animals.

>>CORRECT!

 Because, the vinyl and a variety of plastics we use cause environmental pollution.

>>CORRECT!
 Recently, we are also reducing our use of vinyl and a variety of plastics.

>>CORRECT!

Lastly, we must use the earth cleanly for the future.

>>CORRECT!

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