Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Elisha! Thank you for completing your homework. Check my corrections below. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
My hometown is Bucheon.
>>CORRECT!
Bucheon is a cultualcity in famous.
>>Bucheon is famous for being a cultural city.
In Bucheon, there is a cartoon festival called Bicof and Bucheon Film Festival Bifan.
>>In Bucheon, there is a cartoon festival called Bucheon International Comics Festival (BICOF) and a film festival which is called Bucheon International Fantastic Film Festival(BIFAN)
Use the word in a sentence
1. My aunt lives in Ilsan
>>My aunt lives in Ilsan. (Make sure to always end your sentences with a period. Punctuations are very important in written English.)
2. I have a big family
>>My aunt lives in Ilsan.
3. Among my grandparents only my grandmother is alive.
>>CORRECT!
4. My sister is like a friend to me
>>CORRECT!
5. my uncle looks young.
>>My uncle looks young. (All sentences begin with a capital letter. Make sure that you use it.)
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