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Hi KC,
I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience.
Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.
I hope you\'ll have a great time at work!!!
Have a wonderful day!!!!
T. Jeny
I just know that it is a new virus that there is no any cure for the virus yet.
>>I just know that the new virus doesn\'t have any cure yet.
The symptom looks like a flu, but the disease makes people ill very fast and kill them as always, especially old people and children is vulnerable to the virus..
>>The symptom is like flu, but the disease makes people easily ill and would kill them. Especially old people and children are vulnerable to the virus.
A few days ago, one of my co-workers told me that lots of new viruses have been appearing in recent years and it might be someone\'s or any groups\'s conspiracy to sell their new medicine at the risk of our lives..
>>A few days ago, one of my co-workers told me that lots of new viruses have been appearing in recent years and it might be a person\'s or a group\'s conspiracy to sell their new medicine at the risk of our lives.
While I was hearing what he said, I felt like it could be true.
>>While I was hearing what he was saying, I realized that it could be true.
It\'s possible! Now we have to try to find a interrelationship between medical firms\' break-even point and the time when the virus appeared. haha
>>It\'s possible! Now we have to try to find an interrelationship between medical firms\' break-even point and the time when the virus appeared. haha
If it\'s true, I can\'t forgive them..!
>>correct
Yesterday, our company handed out some masks to all of my co-workers in order to prevent the coronavirus from getting the disease.
>>Yesterday, our company handed out some masks to all of my co-workers to prevent us from getting the disease.
I didn\'t wear it anyway... because someone told me that we can get the disease through other\'s cornea. --;;
>>I didn\'t wear it anyway because someone told me that we can get the disease through other\'s cornea. --;;
Have a great day~
>>correct
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