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2020-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. What do you think will be the implication if common household appliances will continue to lose their appeal due to the smartphone apps? - I think there won\'t be any big influence. Of course using it now it\'s unusual and weird. But, we will adapt. For example, when the smartphones appeared everyone was stunned and uncomfortable. And look at the people now, we are all using it freely. At first, every change is awkward but as time passes by we will adapt. 2. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the app services? - I think the advantages make it easy to use and disadvantages are that older people are complex using it. 3. What do you think should be done so that people will continue to use household appliances? - To continue using home appliance, it should be developed to be easier to use and it should be safe

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy

I think there won\'t be any big influence.

>>CORRECT!

Of course using it now it\'s unusual and weird.

>>Of course using it now, it\'s unusual and weird.

But, we will adapt.

>>CORRECT!

For example, when the smartphones appeared everyone was stunned and uncomfortable.

>>CORRECT!

And look at the people now, we are all using it freely.

>>CORRECT!

At first, every change is awkward but as time passes by we will adapt.

>>CORRECT!

I think the advantages make it easy to use and disadvantages are that older people are complex using it.

>> I think the advantages makes it easy to use and disadvantages are that older people are having hard time using it.

To continue using home appliance, it should be developed to be easier to use and it should be safe

>>To continue using home appliances, it should be developed to be easier to use and it should be safer.

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