Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: What is your favorite Lunar New Year memory? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I recently visited Jeju island.
On new years day, families and relatives gathered and bow as a greeting.
Also, we visited relatives\' house to bow as a greeting.
This custom is getting appeard in cities, but it is still in Jeju island.
I was very tired to meet many people but I feel many things seeing the aged people is getting older.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. It\'s great to hear from you. Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it. Enjoy the rest of your evening. I look forward to tomorrow. ~ Teacher Jane ^^
I recently visited Jeju island.
>>> CORRECT =)
On new years day, families and relatives gathered and bow as a greeting.
>>> On new years day, families and relatives gather and bow as a greeting.
Also, we visited relatives\' house to bow as a greeting.
>>> Also, we visited relatives\' houses to bow as a greeting.
This custom is getting appeard in cities, but it is still in Jeju island.
>>> This custom is dying out in cities but it is still practiced in Jeju Island.
I was very tired to meet many people but I feel many things seeing the aged people is getting older.
>>> I was very tired meeting many people but I felt different emotions seeing the older people.
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