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Today, smartphone apps can conduct the work of washing machines, TVs, and even refrigerators.

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 This trend is ongoing, and it causes common household appliances to lose appeal, due to more convenient sevice that apps can provide.

>> This trend is ongoing, and it causes common household appliances to lose appeal, due to more convenient services that apps can provide.

 If common household appliances continue to lose appeal, this and related industry will be reducted.

>> If common household appliances continue to lose appeal, this and related industry will be reduced.

This will apparantly lead to unemployment in related jobs.

>>This will apparently lead to unemployment in related jobs.

However, I suggest to think of this as changing of era.

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Inventions of household appliances caused difference in humen\'s, especially women\'s lives.

>>Inventions of household appliances caused difference in human\'s, especially women\'s lives.

 These machines gave an oppurtunity for women\'smarket entry, which led to improvement in womem\'s human rights.

>>These machines gave an opportunity for women\'s market entry, which led to improvement in women\'s human rights.

 I am sure that even with common household appliances, housework is still a hard work.

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 Thus, faster and easier ways to finish it can cause many postive effects.

>> Thus, faster and easier ways to finish it can cause many positive effects.

For instance, we can get more free time to do things we like with the time we were supposed to do houseworks.

>>For instance, we can get more free time to do things we like with the time we were supposed to do house works.

 Overall, I think common appliances losing appeal can bring some positive changes.

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