Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Where in the world would you most like to go for your next vacation? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I want to go Austrailia for my next vacation.
I heard that Austrailia is the best place to live in.
I want to see many animals and go to the park in there.
If I daughther come in elementary school and have winter vacation, I want to stay in Austrailia for a month.
I am looking forward to going to Austrailia.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Serena! Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you can go to Australia someday. I think it would be very helpful. Have a wonderful weekend. ~ Teacher Jane ^^
I want to go Austrailia for my next vacation.
>>> I want to go to Australia for my next vacation.
I heard that Austrailia is the best place to live in.
>>> I heard that Australia is the best place to live in.
I want to see many animals and go to the park in there.
>>> I want to see many animals and go to the park.
If I daughther come in elementary school and have winter vacation, I want to stay in Austrailia for a month.
>>> When my daughter starts elementary school and has winter vacation, I want to stay in Australia for a month.
I am looking forward to going to Austrailia.
>>> I am looking forward to going to Australia.
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