HOMEWORK~!!

2020-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. How do you keep yourself healthy? - I\'m working out five times a week to keep my healthy. I take omega 3 and vitamin C everyday and I drink 2 Liters of water every day. I take a nap for 30 minutes a day. Most importantly, I quit smoking 2. In your opinion, what is the most effective way to prevent the spread of the virus? Why? -I find the most effective way is mental attitude by oneself. You should wash your hands and eat meal well even if you are troublesome. And you have to increase your immunity by yourself. Ultimately, you have to do the most basic somethings first

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

Wow! That\'s amazing. Keep up on protecting yourself. :)

~Teacher Lucy

I\'m working out five times a week to keep my healthy.

>>I\'m working out five times a week to keep my health.
I take omega 3 and vitamin C everyday and I drink 2 Liters of water every day.

>>CORRECT!
I take a nap for 30 minutes a day.

>>CORRECT!
Most importantly, I quit smoking

>>CORRECT!

I find the most effective way is mental attitude by oneself.

>>CORRECT!

You should wash your hands and eat meal well even if you are troublesome.

>>You should wash your hands and eat meals well even if you are troublesome.

And you have to increase your immunity by yourself.

>>CORRECT!

Ultimately, you have to do the most basic somethings first

>> Ultimately, you have to do the most basic things first.

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