Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do you worry about diseases?
I have a lot of worries about the disease.
The reason is because I have three children at home.
It\'s scary to hear that I have a coronavirus confirmed patient in near my house.
I hope everything goes smoothly.
강사 첨삭
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I have a lot of worries about the disease.
>>CORRECT!
The reason is because I have three children at home.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I am worried because of my children.
It\'s scary to hear that I have a coronavirus confirmed patient in near my house.
>>It\'s scary to hear that there is a confirmed coronavirus patient living near my area.
I hope everything goes smoothly.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I hope that everything will be fine.
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