Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Is there a history of disease in your family?
My family has a weak bronchus.
So we catch a cold get well.
My family always eats pear bellflower roots juice.
How about you?
- Alisha.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Our health is very important. We should take care of ourselves especially when we have a history of disease in our family. As for my family, I think that we have a history of having high blood pressure.~~T.Dee
My family has a weak bronchus.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: My family has a history of having weak bronchus.
So we catch a cold get well.
>>This is why we catch a cold easily.
My family always eats pear bellflower roots juice.
>>My family always takes bellflower root and pear juice.
How about you?
>>CORRECT!
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